Dear
Neerjaji,
Namaste.
Though I completed
reading your book by June 12, some interruptions and distractions kept me from
writing to you till today.
I enjoyed reading
the book, which has a unique language and presentation. The words come from a
certain inspiration and conviction, it seems to me.
Impressions:
The book gives a
good picture of the teachings of the Geeta to newcomers. Readers will know the
range of topics that the ancient poem covered. The topics you have highlighted
can impress young people. Stories with valuable messages like the one on Two
cats (page 44) and a second on The Happy Man (page 46) make the reading quite
delightful and easy. The section on six kinds of emotional traps and how to
handle them, at the end of the book, add value to the work. The Seven Principles
(page 52) are well outlined. The classification of people into child, youth,
householder and elder and their description seem to have an original flavor in
them. Quotations from Gandhi and Goethe, Swami Chinmayananda and Pascal have
enriched the book.
Suggestions:
Please provide an
Index in your next edition. Supply verse numbers for all the shlokas that you
have quoted from the Geeta. Sanskrit words may please be given for the “Five
Distractions on the Path of Yoga” (page 32).
Summary comment:
Your book is an attractive addition to the available books in English on the
eternal message of the Song Celestial.
Congratulations.
Hope you will come out with more such useful, practical
writing.
With
regards,
S
Chidananda
Personal
Website: www.fowai.net
Instead
of deriving pleasure from what he has, he derives pain from what others have. -
Bertrand Russel on "the envious person"
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